{ "config": { "pace_min": 4.6, "pace_max": 5.2, "dialogue_min": 0.35, "dialogue_max": 0.48, "tension_gap_max": 45.0, "numeric_coverage_min": 0.6, "aphorism_max": 3, "hook_lead_seconds": 3.0, "hook_lead_chars_min": 12 }, "reports": [ { "story": "episodes/production/career-wife/upper-v5-vertical-klein4b.json", "project_id": "life-series-002-female-embalmer-upper-v5-vertical-klein4b", "part": "upper", "scenes": 43, "seconds": 300.0, "checks": [ { "gate": "字速密度", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "chars": 1382, "seconds": 300.0, "cps": 4.61 }, "expected": "4.6–5.2 字/秒", "fix": "低于下限=画面在空转，补写台词或压缩镜头；高于上限=TTS 会赶，拆镜。" }, { "gate": "冷开钩子", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "lead_chars": 14, "consequence_hits": [ "对着" ], "text": "新娘在交换戒指前接了个电话。她说，有两家人明早会对着别人的父亲，磕最后一个头。" }, "expected": "前 3.0s ≥ 12 字，且命中后果词", "fix": "把行业术语翻译成普通人 1 秒能懂的后果；后果必须落在前 3 秒，不能拖到第 6 秒。" }, { "gate": "对白占比", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "dialogue_chars": 579, "narration_chars": 803, "char_ratio": 0.419, "scene_ratio": 0.442 }, "expected": "字数口径 35%–48%", "fix": "对白过高=滑成第三人称剧，丢掉第二人称代入；对白过低=没有正面交锋，情绪起不来。注意 config 的 dialogue_scene_ratio_target 是镜头口径，与此处字数口径不可直接比较。" }, { "gate": "无钩子空窗", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "worst_seconds": 24.6, "gaps": [] }, "expected": "最长连续低张力 ≤ 45.0s", "fix": "空窗落在 60–150 秒区间等于把第二流失高峰让出去；插一次小危机或反派伏笔。" }, { "gate": "反派在场", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "name": "周伟东", "appears_in": [ "upper-s06b", "v5-end-03" ], "speaks_in": [] }, "expected": "上集至少出场 1 次；下集至少有 1 句正面台词", "fix": "只在调查结论里被念名字的反派，观众恨不起来，也就不会评论和转发。" }, { "gate": "物件回环", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "head": [ "二十六万", "停住的戒指", "退款单" ], "tail": [ "停住的戒指", "银灰反光袖" ], "shared": [ "停住的戒指" ] }, "expected": "开头物件必须在末 3 镜之一变义回收", "fix": "回环缺失=结尾只剩口号；把开头那件最锋利的道具还回观众手里。" }, { "gate": "代价换算", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "scenes": [ "upper-s18" ] }, "expected": "每集 ≥ 1 次", "fix": "把金额换算成劳动时长/动作次数/身体成本；'六十八万'是抽象的，'连着两年每个周末凌晨四点起来拍接亲'才是戏。标 cost_conversion=true。" }, { "gate": "数字锚点", "level": "warn", "passed": true, "actual": { "coverage": 0.86, "scenes": 43 }, "expected": "≥ 60%", "fix": "每 2–3 镜一个可核对数字，夸张情节才像发生过。" }, { "gate": "格言体配额", "level": "warn", "passed": true, "actual": { "count": 3, "lines": [ { "id": "upper-s15b", "line": "别人敢不敢请我，是我的本事。徐宁做得正、站得直，不该先向闲话认输。我替她站出来。" }, { "id": "upper-s21b", "line": "不让她出现、不让她说职业，还不让她进我的店。你签的是我，还是一个假的家庭？" }, { "id": "v5-end-02", "line": "你按认定的对错选。我来承担职业的后果。" } ] }, "expected": "每集 ≤ 3 句", "fix": "金句超配 = 人人都在讲道理，没人在生活。其余改成'动作→物件→感官→数字'的行为化台词。" }, { "gate": "片尾可选项", "level": "warn", "passed": true, "actual": { "found": [ "抢工期的转运工", "罗经理", "服务中心里的第三个人" ], "declared": [ "抢工期的转运工", "罗经理", "服务中心里的第三个人" ] }, "expected": "片尾引导必须给 ≥ 2 个具名选项", "fix": "'真凶是谁？评论区留下选择'——观众连名字都没听过就没法选，评论区拉不动。" } ], "failed": [], "warned": [] }, { "story": "episodes/production/career-wife/lower.json", "project_id": "life-series-002-female-embalmer-lower", "part": "lower", "scenes": 44, "seconds": 300.0, "checks": [ { "gate": "字速密度", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "chars": 1459, "seconds": 300.0, "cps": 4.86 }, "expected": "4.6–5.2 字/秒", "fix": "低于下限=画面在空转，补写台词或压缩镜头；高于上限=TTS 会赶，拆镜。" }, { "gate": "冷开钩子", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "lead_chars": 12, "consequence_hits": [ "对着", "磕头" ], "text": "明早，两家人就真的差点对着别人的父亲磕头。上一集，林川暂停婚礼；七秒原片证明，换标签的人不是徐宁。" }, "expected": "前 3.0s ≥ 12 字，且命中后果词", "fix": "把行业术语翻译成普通人 1 秒能懂的后果；后果必须落在前 3 秒，不能拖到第 6 秒。" }, { "gate": "对白占比", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "dialogue_chars": 677, "narration_chars": 782, "char_ratio": 0.464, "scene_ratio": 0.5 }, "expected": "字数口径 35%–48%", "fix": "对白过高=滑成第三人称剧，丢掉第二人称代入；对白过低=没有正面交锋，情绪起不来。注意 config 的 dialogue_scene_ratio_target 是镜头口径，与此处字数口径不可直接比较。" }, { "gate": "无钩子空窗", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "worst_seconds": 13.8, "gaps": [] }, "expected": "最长连续低张力 ≤ 45.0s", "fix": "空窗落在 60–150 秒区间等于把第二流失高峰让出去；插一次小危机或反派伏笔。" }, { "gate": "反派在场", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "name": "周伟东", "appears_in": [ "lower-s23a", "lower-s23b", "lower-s23c" ], "speaks_in": [ "lower-s23a" ] }, "expected": "上集至少出场 1 次；下集至少有 1 句正面台词", "fix": "只在调查结论里被念名字的反派，观众恨不起来，也就不会评论和转发。" }, { "gate": "物件回环", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "head": [ "三组记录", "收起的头纱", "旧存折", "旧手表", "暂停婚礼", "最后一面", "账户负数" ], "tail": [ "同款动作", "旧存折", "网约车女司机" ], "shared": [ "旧存折" ] }, "expected": "开头物件必须在末 3 镜之一变义回收", "fix": "回环缺失=结尾只剩口号；把开头那件最锋利的道具还回观众手里。" }, { "gate": "代价换算", "level": "fail", "passed": true, "actual": { "scenes": [ "lower-s20" ] }, "expected": "每集 ≥ 1 次", "fix": "把金额换算成劳动时长/动作次数/身体成本；'六十八万'是抽象的，'连着两年每个周末凌晨四点起来拍接亲'才是戏。标 cost_conversion=true。" }, { "gate": "数字锚点", "level": "warn", "passed": true, "actual": { "coverage": 0.98, "scenes": 44 }, "expected": "≥ 60%", "fix": "每 2–3 镜一个可核对数字，夸张情节才像发生过。" }, { "gate": "格言体配额", "level": "warn", "passed": true, "actual": { "count": 3, "lines": [ { "id": "lower-s12", "line": "今天真正出错的不是你的职业，是有人想把责任，推给一个最容易被偏见围住的人。" }, { "id": "lower-s21", "line": "视频不发网上。我把原始卡号、备份记录和拍摄时间都交调查组。我要的不是流量，是证据。" }, { "id": "lower-s23c", "line": "周伟东擅换束带、抄反顺序。撤销徐宁停岗，责任移交追究。" } ] }, "expected": "每集 ≤ 3 句", "fix": "金句超配 = 人人都在讲道理，没人在生活。其余改成'动作→物件→感官→数字'的行为化台词。" }, { "gate": "片尾可选项", "level": "warn", "passed": true, "actual": { "found": [ "还是同一个人", "只是长得相像" ], "declared": [ "还是同一个人", "只是长得相像" ] }, "expected": "片尾引导必须给 ≥ 2 个具名选项", "fix": "'真凶是谁？评论区留下选择'——观众连名字都没听过就没法选，评论区拉不动。" } ], "failed": [], "warned": [] } ] }